I Can't write no love poem

by Gizmo   Nov 8, 2007


But i can't write no love poems,
but i can give you my soul and heart,
with a thousand kept promises,
that we'll never be apart.

but,i can't write no love poems,
but i would give you the sky,
each star containing a wish,
that you won't say goodbye.

but,i can't write no love poems,
but I'll take you as far as out of space,
so you can have your dreams made,
and i can see a smile on your face

but i can't write no love poems,
I'm not romantic in anyway
because when i try to write love poems,
i got nothing to say.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I like the idea for this piece a lot. it's very sweet and romantic. the only thing I don't like is the slang way you say your line, "I can't write no love poems" i would put it like " I can't write a love poem" or "I can't write any love poems" because that's a little more grammatically correct and sounds better to me, but in the end, that's just my opinion, and whether or not you use it, you still have a beautiful piece!
    *ME*

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