by Pete Nov 8, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
~~~~~~Winter~~~~~~ |
by Just Keara
I tell you one thing, you are VERY talented to do something like. this. each line have mostly all the same letters, in addition to the rhymes. 5/5 |
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
This was extremely brilliant and put a smile onto my face after a long day. The way each word twisted and knotted my tongue made it quite sore at the end, only to find out to my surprise there was still a second part! |
by NeferNoir
Goodness! I don't know where to start comlimenting on this amazing write. The flow of creativity here flows so beautifully.. I am amazed by the way you write using alphabets combined with rhyming.. And I adore the imagination in your words.. |
by NeferNoir
Goodness! I don't know where to begin complimenting this amazing piece of poem.. The creativity that you inject in this poem is priceless.. I am amazed at the way you write this piece using the alphabets and with rhyming and creative combination of words... I adore every single line in this poem... Very unusual but utterly captivating... |
by Allison
Wow, I loved your poem! It was so much fun to read out loud. ^_^ It flowed nicely and the rhyming was good, keep up the good work. I'm adding it to my favorites. *5/5* |