A Different Love

by Corruption   Nov 8, 2007


Standing next to her,
Hold her tight.
Seeing her beauty,
Hearing her sweet voice.
Fingers intwined,
Just as our hearts!

I can't help but wonder,
Am i falling in love?
Would it be wise?
We both hope for no pain.
Will our hopes be fulfilled?
I think i will risk it.

She is more beautiful than the stars.
She is down to earth,
And lots of fun.
I always wonder,
When i will see her again.
This is going to be different!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What a refreshing poem!
    Indeed one always have to believe this time around it will be different:)

    I think i will risk it.

    ^^
    Most important line, imo:)

    Good work, Keenan!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was beautifully written! I cudnt even tell u how much I loved this 1!

  • 17 years ago

    by victoria

    I love this poem.I can diffently feel it.
    Great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Amazing if gives you a bit of what you/ character is feeling good job one of my favorite love poems by you..Great job Keenan

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