Betrayal

by Vincent Thornsberry   Nov 9, 2007


All I ever wanted to do
Is infuse all of my love to you
You acted like you accepted
In the end I was decepted
You tricked me into believing
Believing that you would never be leaving
I threw all my trust to you
even when everyone said not to
Then you broke my trust
With your undying lust
You went and broke my heart
With your dark and devilish art
Of acting like you had some feeling
In the end you left ME reeling
Something no other could have done
No one else could have won
Any other I would have figured out
But you really know what you're about
You have broken my soul now
So control me as only you know how
Because I am dead
I only live within my head
You use me for your pleasure
Knowing you cause pain without measure
I go now to silently die
This is the end of me....Goodbye

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    It's sad. :[
    and so good.
    i really like it.
    *hugs*
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Betrayal... this poem was as i wud usually say awsome but i can't even really describe how it was to read! seriously awsome job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "You have broken my soul now
    So control me as only you know how"

    ^^Love those lines. I found them to hold so much power and depth, in so few words. Favourite part of the poem.

    I thought you used a lot of fillers in here (You, and, I, the etc) and I thought that somewhat disturbed the flow in places.

    Other than that though, I enjoyed this, it held my interest throughout, flow was okay for the most part, and I liked the imagery you portrayed.

    On the whole, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Janessa

    This poem is really good i like every thing that you said in it keep up the great work

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