Wow...you're sure you're 12?? This poem was very good for a 12 year old. Take that as a compliment, not an insult. But, overall, very good peice of work here. And I know how you feel, I'm almost 18 and still have that darkness lingering over my head wherever I go. It does feel as if you're alone, doesn't it? You're not, there are many other people who feel exactly the same way you and I do. But, cheer up, life goes by quick! Again. great job on the poem. 5/5
~Forever In This Darkness~
**Danielle**