Rejected

by cody   Nov 9, 2007


Shut down, pushed away,
you try so hard
but in the end it just wasn't hard enough
you try to build your self up
make your self perfect
until someone comes alone and knocks you off
so every thing you have done just falls
and shatters on the ground
no feeling
no sympathy
nothing else to do but crawl in a dark hole
until you find that some one
that one person who is as low as you
and builds you up higher then you were befor
but you still sit on that edge
remembering how it was
and with a slight tap you could
fall back in to the deep hole you have made

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    This poem is soooooo good..i really love it...not just saying that cause thats what a lot of suck ups say..... but yeah everything about it....it just flows so well and its sooo true i mean lyk it only takes one person who is as low as u or higher) to build you up...and u feel so good but then u could fall back in the hole with a click of the finger.....soooo true
    and you worded it amazingly...

    nice work literally..