Hurt and despair

by lish   Nov 9, 2007


Do you know what its like to hurt so much
that every morning you just want to die?
Do you know what its like to get home at night
and have nothing to do but cry?

Do you know what its like to hurt so much
that all you want to do is bleed?
Do you know what its like to get home at night
and turn to your stash of weed?

Do you know what its like to hurt so much
that you cant even get out of bed?
Do you know what its like to get home at night
and have him expect to be given head?

Do you know what its like to hurt so much
that you just want to run away?
Do you know what its like to get home at night
and have nothing left to say?

If you know what its like to hurt this much
you've experienced a little of my life.
"i just cant take it anymore"
i say as i take out the knife.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is really good
    the repetition of the 1st and 3rd lines really gets the message across and makes the poem more powerful
    the first stanza really got my attention and was very effect
    the emotion was deep and made the poem that bit much better its very sad but amazing

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow very sad...but its a great poem!!!...

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. What an ending. Well, the emotion was deep and I felt your pain. But it seemed as if the poem was to repetitive, next time maybe switch it up a bit. Great job!

    Amber..

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written dark poem, It does make me sad that so many feel this way, but it is a worthy theme in dark poetry 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is also great. The emotion flowed very well!!! Keep up the good work.