Comments : Where i should not be

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I love it, ur rhyming structure let it flow nicly into the and which got me into it. amazing job. plz comment on one of mine thanks:]

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I feel the same way, I'd like to live wayyyyy back before everything started, when life was about living not about making things right to live.