Back off, the world is a lie

by blue angel   Nov 9, 2007


------------------DADDY'S GIRL no more---------------------

Jane was an amazing girl with an amazing life. She had a good family, is pretty and attends to a good school. To summarize it all -HER LIFE WAS PERFECT, JANE IS A LUCKY GIRL.

All her life, she swore to be on top, always being best, bringing honor to her beloved family. "Lord thanks for my happy life, please don't take this all away". A silent prayer she utters... every night before going to bed.

Even though Jane is single and has no boyfriend, she's contented. You can't consider her as an outcast since she has also lots of friends, is quite popular actually and has experienced being courted and loved. Boys know her and some girls envy her.

Then one day, as Jane was coming home from school, she saw her mother crying... "Mum did our dog died again? ". Her mom didn't answer, instead, gave her a picture of her dad together with a young girl about her age on the beach. " I had known this for a long time yet I didn't have the courage to tell you. Jane, love, your father is cheating on us" her mom wept silently.

"Lord, this can't be real... It can't be!... dad was perfect, he won't do this to us, to me and to our family"...."Mum is this for real? am i imagining things or ..."

Her question was left hanging as a shot was heard in the entire house. A gun fell and thick oozing blood was flowing on the clean carpeted floor. She swirls and twirls until her vision turned blurry and her life was shattered.

-DAD, you just don't know how it truly feel to have your family broken... although not yet, but i guess it will be :(

(a shocker! my first to write a story and it all happened in a single sitting)

-Cleng 11/09/07

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