There are times when I feel exactly like this and that's when I write those sad love poems I do. You really expressed the feeling well and I felt every emotion that came out if this. I totally loved it. 5/5

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WOW.. i seriously lovee this poem.. and i can soo relate to it.. especially today after arguing with my boyfriend..

i loveee these 2 stanzas

If I ignored my worries
It means I don't care
That's far from the truth
So shy away, I can not dare

It's a risk I often take
My fears to explain to you
I wish you would stop and listen
Like you once loved to do

amazinggg and soo well written.. great great job 5/5!!

=)

I loved this poem. I understand it and can relate to it in some ways. As I'm sure many other people can. You expressed how you felt so deeply into this poem. I enjoy you love poems they hold alot of emotion within them. The flow was nicely the word choice simple yet effective. Well done. ~Mel

Ohhh I LOVE this.

I found this to be so moving and sweet and yet filled with so much melancholy simeutaneously, and for me that made a very powerful effect on the overall piece.

I love the flow in this piece, it was beautiful throughout, and the words just rolled right from my tounge.

The transistion between oppisite feelings really touched my heart, as so many people will be able to relate.

I love this!