Although this piece is short, It contains a strong message. If we try to find kindness in man kind, we will. I liked the rhymes and strong meaning. Well done 5/5

I love this piece...short but sweet and straight to the point. Emotion is clear from the first line and gets better as it goes along.

Flow was good throughout the piece, although I do think this could be even better if you were to add more imagery into the piece.

Other than that though, I enjoyed this, and found it to be beautifully written with an insanely great message behind the words.

Short sweet and to the point. Great flow, consistent rhyme. Good job.