Comments : Payn

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Great poem. But try to go easy on the caps.

    -SS

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Yeah and you shoul put alot more emotion to it but it was good

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    I think this is gud... Its short but it says alot 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Nice 5/5