by debbylyn Nov 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Until the end of time |
by Tom Swart
Wow I liked this. It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace. |
by Rachel RTVW
I love this poem. It speaks to me metaphorically as well. Another flawlessly structured piece with vivid imagery, impeccable flow that is creatively put together. This is one of my favorites! |
by biancaa
This is a truely amazinggg poem. I just joined this site today and it's people like you, with their flawless deep writing, that made me want to join. It is AMAZING and so figurative, i love it =). |
A very beautiful poem which flowed so well. I loved the ending too. |
I loved it, it was different. i thought it was awesome. 5*5 |