Falling Star

by Kelvin Masi   Nov 9, 2007


You are like a star in the sky, there for all to see, but you come home at night for me, but you are there for friends and kids. But remember not only my "does" but my "dids". I love you now with my heart. Its not the end; its only the start. If i see you fall, i'll make a wish. When i'm hungry, you'll be my main dish.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Simple nice poem...love is amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Lol like the ending
    nice poem

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is pretty good poem. i enjoyed it

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it...but it could be alot better use spaces and commas and peroids...its a good start

  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    Awww this is so sweet your good with words and your a good writer! you should comment my poems