by Brye Jones Nov 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Seeing him through the halls, I wonder what to say to him. I think and think. Then I walk pass him,not saying anything. I feel that I lost my chance. But what should I say to him. I think of things but I don't know what. |
by Sarah
I think it would have been better if it was put in paragraphs, but still very good job. How about you check out some of my poems, tell me how to make them better. (: |
Good poem. Would be better if you wrote it with lines instead of a whole paragraph. |