Comments : Seeing Him

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Good poem. Would be better if you wrote it with lines instead of a whole paragraph.

    -SS

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    I think it would have been better if it was put in paragraphs, but still very good job. How about you check out some of my poems, tell me how to make them better. (:

    --Raven