It is good art, sp unique

I think you're putting yourself down, this is another awesome piece and it flows really well. the emotion is so raw and it's like as i read this i felt really angry for you, if that makes sense.
i thought that this was a really powerful piece
5/5
ali x

A great job on this one! Like it how you repeated the 4 lines. And a very interesting subject you touched with this poem off people who really aren't nothing that special and act like their everything in this world, amazing.
Very enjoyful read.
5/5! Keep it up

Whoa! This poem is really good. i enjoyed reading it. I like the way you kinda make it song like instead of poem like. Its really good. Keep up the good work! ~Neely~

Its not that bad man.. maybe a little work would help it come together better.. i love the first two lines though.. good word usage