It's great! Another poem which you wrote for me. Now in real life you can't stop time but i'll be sure to put you into that situation where it will feel like it is only us and you did stop time, even though you didn't :P Great poem.

Another excellent poem! The emotion was so warmly shown, it was amazing. *5/5*

This was very beautiful, except it lacked the structure. Maybe if you put this into stanzas, it would look better. Great poem though. 5/5

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I agree more stanzas would have made it better but other than that it was perfect. 5/5

I like how you wrote this poem and the overall idea of this poem... its really nice/sweet.
good work

I agree that it might be better if you put it in stanza's.And maybe if you went into each idea a little bit more.I wouldn't say this is your best, but it's probabily still better then anything I could write. :P
A 4/5 but I won't down vote you.
Rado

It's hard for the reader not to think about the one they love while reading this piece. If only we could freeze time just once forever and stay in the place we love most. amazing title on this poem really catches the reader and drags them in. 5/5 GG23