Oh sissy skye, this is remarkable, it made me cry along the way. I just love your poetry, you rock at it! I suck at it x3 I just loved this one, it was sad. It was happy at the same time well it just shows in sometime of your life your going to look back on life, and think about it. Thats what i think about it. Well i just love it =D

~*x*~SissyxRose/Courtney~*x*~

Aww amazing, It so happy in some places and then again so sad. And I love it how you put suicide in a person like it's your friend, so good! Atleast I understood so. And also whole poem was very deep.
Amazing write!
5/5 Keep it up

Hey I like the poem I like rimes MEs like rimes me funny. YOu weird

Beautifully written. :] I love the way you organized the stanzas and the poem had a natural flow 5/5

I love it
btw: thanks for reading my poem ' the true me'
if you liked that one read the rest of mine....hope you enjoy as much as i did yours

ty again

Man you keeep amazing me you know that?! o.o this poem was just like amazing! Like the girl or boy said above its cool how you made suicide like it could be your friend! It has a whole lot of emotion, amazing job. I was intense every bit of it., i was actually sad when it came to an end lol...

Keeep up the good work,
Dante :)

Another great poem!!! :D
wow this poem has alot of work put into it hu, it has lots of good points and strong word choice. it was a pleasure reading it! keep it up your doing great! ^_^