The Girl In The Mirror

by DeepLife   Nov 10, 2007


I looked at the reflection,
And saw a girl who was hurt.

I stared at the sorrowful look she had,
Understanding how much pain and rage she felt.

Her hands lay on the sink,
Clenched tightly into a fist.

I looked into her red, watery eyes,
Seeing how she is trying so hard not to lose control.

I watch a movie that was played in her mind,
Seeing what caused her to become like this.

Betrayal seemed to have stabbed her heart,
Spreading hate thought out it.

She trusted someone,
And they deceive her.

She felt foolish,
Thinking that this person was different from the others.

She was used,
And now she was abandoned.

I felt her rage,
In the very pit of my heart.

This girl wasn't just anybody,
She is me.

By realizing this,
I felt a rush of hatred travel though out my body.

Hot streams of tears rolled down my cheek.
As I looked at my flushed face.

Then I saw they very person who betrayed me,
Standing in front of me grinning.

Now the mirror was shattered,
Destroying the person I hate.

The crimson color dripped from my fist,
As I pull it away from the glass.

Feeling a sense of control,
A thought exploded in my mind.

Sweet revenge.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Awesome poem..
    strong feelings..and i like the wording..
    it was interesting..
    keep it up. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I think this poem was well written out and very thougtful. I seriously enjoyed reading it. Lol while my crazy mom drove the car with road rage.

    Other than that its sad but I got the picture. 5/5 sweet heart. Keep up your writtings like this. Funny how that works right, when where sad about something the best comes out and sometines we think the worst.

    So hey, thank you for reading my poem "Freedom". I am really happy I wasn't the only one feeling like that.

    Hope that we could calide once more in the future.

    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I think you have a wonderful way of expressing yourself. The way you word your sentence is just wonderful. My suggestion though is that maybe you could work on your vocab. Mine's not that great either though.. Maybe we should like start a thread in our club.

    I watch a movie that was played in her mind,
    Seeing what caused her to become like this.

    ^^Ooooh. Loved that line.