I really liked this poem.. i loved how you portrayed desperation..

Its sadly beautiful..

I hate thoes bullitens too D:

they're so annoying >.<
I just backspace after i read the first few words..

Anyway... great write i loved it

5/5

O_O shoo coote!! Those chain letters really get to me -.- But sometimes when I read the love poems and at the end it says make a wish or something..I always wish for one thing...For this guy I like to love me ^^ so I can realte to this poem..He does love me Im glad to know that LOL Yet I still do it =P ^^ wishing for him to be happy. Amazing rhyming I shall read some more in the future ^^ xxx Love Roxeh mwah xx