Kasumi (ENGLISH ver.)

by SCARECROW   Nov 10, 2007


There are no spelling errors in the poem, believe me, I have checked (I am referring to the "ObscuRed").
Also, the title is Japanese, it translates to "hazy"...
Thank you so very much for reading! I truly appreciate it.
*******************************

Your aesthetics provoke vulgarity
and you pass through me consistently
although I cannot distinguish-

Color-induced ambiguity has rendered the seasons
senseless
and my chest heaves
beneath the windowsill,
splitting at the seams with nausea.

The jealousy has reversed...

How much more-?
ObscuRed, not green,
the aesthetics are no longer-

Where is the method for my madness?

Your red is on my fingertips
and I am now a delightful shade
of envy-induced purple.

Euphoria?
Medicated predicament-

Your eyes are a fathomless shade
of crystal...

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I am honestly impressed. This is one of the most creative poems I've read in a while, endlessly brilliant and powerful. I admire your superb choice of words and captivating atmosphere that you created. Amazing, remarkable poem.
    My interpretation of this piece is certainly different from the message that you wanted to portray, but I think that one of the best things about the poetry is that everyone can understand it in their own way.
    I like the flow from the beginning to the end, too. This is complex and thoughtful piece.
    You have a way with words and I'll surely check out more of your poetry.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    I loved the style! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Ooh this is cool. it induces thought, it's not just some poem you can read and not end up trying to figure out. i love that. so much poetry today is mindless fluff, or all the meaning is in plain view, instead of hidden. lol my poetry is guilty of that.

    anyways, thanks for the comment! =^^= hehehe i usually do capitilize the i's, i was just being lazy. =D *cough* at least i remembered the punctuations...this time. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow..... i loved it.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    Exquisitely written i loved it 5/5

Read All Comments (13)

More Poems By SCARECROW