A really dark write portraying jealously of someone who envys someone who spreads what they think, then kills that person..
Asking herself why she did it..

you could improve your wording a little more, overall a great deep dark write.. i can't help but give this a 5

Keep up the good writes :D.

This was very beautifully written and it flowed nicely. Keep up the good work ^_^ *5/5*

Endless is your talent to create such inspiring, beautiful poetry.
Every word is worth the wait.
I could go on and on with a list of adjectives that would never truly touch your poetic soul; but I do not know what the size limit for a comment is.
Once again, my heart has lifted, fallen, and been broken, in the most delicate of ways by your words.

Wow this poem is really imaginative and creative. Both lexically and poetically strong. The words strung each other makes it a cohesive and a coherent piece. Hats off to you....:) 5/5

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Wow, the emotion filled very well in this poem and it's well written. You must be a great writer. you really deserve 5/5.

Great style and good emotion, very strong emotions and brings the reader into the pain.
all in all good job
5/5

Wow. what can i say? this was SO powerful. it blew me away, the emotion was amazing and the way you described it perfect. simple yet effective. wonderful job. 5/5

Exquisitely written i loved it 5/5

Exquisitely written i loved it 5/5

Wow..... i loved it.....

Ooh this is cool. it induces thought, it's not just some poem you can read and not end up trying to figure out. i love that. so much poetry today is mindless fluff, or all the meaning is in plain view, instead of hidden. lol my poetry is guilty of that.

anyways, thanks for the comment! =^^= hehehe i usually do capitilize the i's, i was just being lazy. =D *cough* at least i remembered the punctuations...this time. =]

I loved the style! 5/5!

Wow...
I am honestly impressed. This is one of the most creative poems I've read in a while, endlessly brilliant and powerful. I admire your superb choice of words and captivating atmosphere that you created. Amazing, remarkable poem.
My interpretation of this piece is certainly different from the message that you wanted to portray, but I think that one of the best things about the poetry is that everyone can understand it in their own way.
I like the flow from the beginning to the end, too. This is complex and thoughtful piece.
You have a way with words and I'll surely check out more of your poetry.
Keep up!