I really liked the emotion you put into this poem... very descriptive.

Its really sad though...

I find poems of love that can't be really dark

Nice write, i give you a 4.3/5

Hmm what a poem,, very interesting actaully, first time i saw the titled it makes me excited to read it,, and now here it is,,,,, there is a great expressing those thoughts and very powerful..

5/5

WOW! This was reallllllllyyy good! i loved the emotion and feelings you put into this, it was utterly amazing and i see no way to improve, wonderful! keep up the great work! =D