by vintage darling Nov 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I'm a song away on your radio, so just get in your car and drive. |
by Em
I love the opening, the style, the flow, the rhyme and most of all the poem. Flawless, 5/5. Em |
by Blissful
Beautiful. The emotions you described here, of getting your heart stolen, were wonderfully said and easy for me to relate with. I loved how the poem flowed effortlessly and the story you told was refreshing. I do think the first sentence was amazing because it truly captured my attention. The last stanza, was a perfect way to end the poem. |
by Marc Ortiz
Oh wow! The opening stanza is really powerful! It really grabs the readers attention... The flow was flawless! Keep up the amazing work! you're really talented! never stop writing. I hope to read more from you. |
by Jessica
Awhh, i loved this hunny. It was so sadd though. I loved the extended metaphor in this, comparing it to different seasons really was effective. the flow was good and the emotion was strong. nice job love. 5/5 |
Wow, this is a very beautiful poem. You expressed the feeling really well and it is well written. Great job. 5/5 |