Omg. i loved it!!!!! that was truely brilliant. omg... i truely cant think of anything to say... which is quite rare... amazing poem. 5/5. great job!!!!!!!!!!!

yours always,
oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

Oh my god! This was so...so...Touching! So full of emotion! Dear lord! I almost choke on my soda when i read that last line! O_O

Keep Writing!
5/5
~Ally

I love the poems that makes my eyes Wet....

and this one just really did......

love u .....

Rob,

This is a touching write with a powerful message behind it.
Typos on the word 'wile' in stanzas 2 and 4 it should be 'while'