Comments : One Mistake to Lose it all

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Aw man!
    now that was sad. and what makes it even more sad is this being true so many times. it sucks i knw..
    no1 is born a criminal.. its all in the circumstances..
    great message and nicely put through!
    im gonna go ahead and say i Loved it!. cuz i really do :]

    lol i actually sang this one to driven under's tune .. XD .
    it fit in nicely :P loved it
    nice work again.!
    KEEP WRITING !!!

    ~Wake~

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    This is one of the best poems that I have ever read!