Really good poem i liked it

Great work! i love it
5/5

Wow that wuz really good. you were very descriptive and it wuz great. good job :-)

VERY discriptive. paints a picture in my mind!!! well done! ;)

A good poem once again
Biya

I think this is great the imagery creats the idea that there is no hope then a little and then none hee. Thats my way of saying i like it.

Kelly
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