I like it
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Maroon 5, have we? I liked this piece.

"...We're both looking for something we've been afraid to find." I kept thinking about that line through the whole piece, and the way that you made it fit. Even if it isn't your's... to me you made it something better. Your emotion was immensly fluid and cannot be denied such justice.

I could almost taste the pain, the regret, the remorse, and how reluctant the person in the piece (if be you indeed) may be. It's a sad sort of feeling, and it touched me in a lot of ways. For it's very easy to relate to such fear and pain even if one hasn't experienced it.

You did a great job, and I truly enjoyed this.

Aww Ciao, that is such a cute poem! I love it, and I know I can relate to it, so I'm sure a lot of people can. *huggles* You're so awesome hunni!
My favorite part was

I used to be the broken one, torn at the seams,
I used to believe in fairytales and dreams;
But I knew life was different, reality was true.
Makes Me Wonder Why I Won't Go Home Without You.

It just flows so wonderfully!! Keep up the amazing work my dear!

Love,
Danielle