OH MY GOSH..this poem was truly amazing!..one of thee best ive ever read on this site..i loved how you made it a story..the words just flowed & put a vivid picture in my mind..
B.E.A.UTIFUL!

Brooke<3

Wow that was really neat, i liked it , it was intriguing, great job, keep up the great work

Wow. I honestly hope you're not actually dealing with this. And, if you are I hope you can fix it, darling. Because, that's a horible way to waste your body away.

The poem itself was flawless. Usually I'm all for punctuation but, I think in this poem it's great without it.
The flow is perfect.
The word choice great. (:
And, the emotion was wonderful.

If this is really what you're dealing with [[ not that i'm saying you are. . . but if you are ] ] i'm here if you need me, darling. (:

Good poem,it would suck to be in that siuation.5/5

Believe me...it does