Thanx guys! It really means something to me that you guys like it. I wanna continue writing but i can only do that if i know people like them. I dont want to post them on here if people wont like them. thanx again

i know how u feel my friends are just like that sometime i cant call them a friend

this is an interesting poem because you express all of your anger and emotion through this piece, which is fine by me, honestly; this poem needs some syntax units. overall, good.

oh and her name is Julia, but i just asked her to prom, i dont love her in the way that i love Chelsey, which i would have asked to prom but she is not going. does that answer your question? <3

hey, i have this friend who is exactly the same way!! i know i should just stop being friends with her but i cant! i know how you feel though! hang in there and keep up the good work!!

Thanks alot... i appreciate it!

Im sorry i sounded so rude lqfootball, i was just really confused... thanks.

Great piece of writing!

'I haven't done a thing
But your treating me like shit
Get off your high horse
And get over it.'

This looks so familiar.
You put it great into words.
Good rhyming.
Really enjoyed reading it.

I couldn't of put it better myself, I've gone through the same shit with a person who I thought was my best mate who really turned out to not be a mate at all.