The 5 senses

by Miranda   Nov 10, 2007


I can see you moving closer.
Your right beside me now.
I look at you in the corner of my eye.
You look kind of nervous,I wonder why.

I can smell you.
You always have a special scent.
It's yours.No other person can have it.
And somehow it's perfect.

I hear you try to say something.
But all that comes out is an "um"
I am staring at you now.
You look more nervous then I expected.

You gently touch my hand.
And I can tell you know now.
I try to turn my head,
but you put your hand on my chin.

I start to say your name to explain,
but I am quieted by your finger.
Your holding my hand,I wonder why.
But I'm suddenly very glad were alone.

I can taste your gentle lips now.
I'm so shocked by the emotion in it.
I've loved you for so long,
But I could never imagine you loving back.

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Just a poem because I was bored.Hope you like it.
Please comment and rate if you have time.

Thanks,
Miranda

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Tht's really nice how you use the five senses to describe him
    good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    A very lovely peice rado.
    The emotions were correct for most people, when their experiencing their first kiss.

    Well done,
    Paula.