First off, I'd change the name to "Scabs Taste Simply Like Victory"
Because that was the last line of the poem, and I just love "simply" in there for some reason.

Usually, I'd tear everything a part, piece by piece and have my say with each line
but all these lines are so amazing, I can't do that. They all stand out and it's great.

Problem is, me being me, I'm going to gripe about formation. Obviously you don't have any (which is sometimes fine) but in this poem it <<craves>> to be put into some type of form.

I really like this, but seriously form would make it ten times better.
Somehow, it just puts more emotion into the poem, form does.
Maybe because you usually don't think in one huge long line, but you pause and think it through, you know?

Anyways.
You're amazing
and you're writing's great.
It's wonderful watching my best friend's writing grow and grow.

And.
We should <<definately>> collab together.
Now?
Whenever.
Just message me/IM me on msn sometime.
xox.

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