Empty capsules, closed minds (Palindrome)

by geeeeee   Nov 11, 2007


Intolerance
Corrupted mentality
Condescending and volatile judgments
Capsules empty like closed minds
Disregarded nations, misplaced souls
Tragic and racial wars, caskets closed
Dominated and demoralized
Stipulated rights with repercussions
Revolution creates conflict
Death among shattered lives

-Reflect-

Lives shattered among death
Conflict creates revolution
Repercussions with rights stipulated
Demoralized and dominated
Closed caskets, tragic racial wars
Souls misplaced, nations disregarded
Minds closed like empty capsules
Judgments volatile and condescending
Mentality corrupted
Intolerance

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  • 11 years ago

    by dalllllal

    Wonderful piece! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    Hey, this is really cool the way you flipped it around! Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Hi great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    You've done an excellent job on this very difficult form. The piece flows well, follows along along with no loss of direction. No part of it seems forced or out of place.

    I love the title....goes right along with one of my favorite sayings " a hard head is a empty mind".............you've written a perfect poetic definition of intolerance....in a very difficult form....well done! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Indeed BRAVO! This form is way too difficult for me, but you made an outstanding poem using it!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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