by Lenny
Heh. The cussing makes it very...you, not the poet essence-you. Too many joining words would be my only critique, it makes sense and tells a story, too structured? |
by Lenny
(whispers take out the cussing) I like it a lot. It flirts with my pyromaniac side. |
Intense. well written and i enjoyed it. Had an excellent rhythm to it. |
by Sourav
To me it's a great poem in a destructive way. I've found the structure is good enough, something new in concept. Interesting indeed. |