One minute u say u love me
then the next u just don't care
one minute I'm your everything
then the next it's like I'm not even there
one minute u love me
then your back 2 her
I'm tired of going back and forth with her
I'm not always gonna be here waiting for my turn
i give up, take her, she likes u... u like her
i hope your happy cause that's all you'll get from me
she'll break your heart and you know it's true
but don't come running back to me cause all I'll do is laugh
don't play with my head like u did before
don't play with my heart cause all you'll get is what u got from the start
Wow it's very good :)
If you'd only work on the lay out a little bit more
it's not to critice you, just to make the poem even BETTER than it allready is
cause i reaaally love this
:) you seem like a really good writer
Sarah x