by Biya Nov 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
A little puzzled, |
by Ali Khan
I love the desire in your words, yearning to be with someone, to hold hands, to talk, to listen, to look into the eyes but oh well sometimes you can't get what you want. Love your poem, it ignites a certain feeling, 5/5 but I would rather vote more than 5 if you make your poems more sensual by not repeating words and put more feelings into it. |