Growing Love

by Goran Rahim   Nov 11, 2007


When I came,
I thought of some roses
But roses are shameful
Facing your beauty.

When I was waiting
Seconds were hours
Yet
I was smiling
Remembering your smile.

When I saw you
You brought me
The world of happiness
The universal of joy.

When I was speaking
My words were mixed
With the heart beats.

When I hugged you,
I felt there is no other place
That can comfort me
But your arms.

When I kissed you
I tasted a true love
That will just grow
As each second pass
I love you forever and ever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I don't know what to say....
    As always your word were beautiful. The poem was rather touching...And made me smile.
    Beautiful, Beautiful write.

    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, this is a very god poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing..

    my fav stanza was

    When I was waiting
    Seconds were hours
    Yet
    I was smiling
    Remembering your smile.

    i loved that line alot

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Another wonderful write! you never fail to impress me! i gotta get one of ur books! haha! wonderful word choice and flow of this poem! keep up the freaking awesome work! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Tell me something... Is this the way one feels when you fall in love or something? I guess now you have become the luckiest guy.. You are a genius.. I couldnt have described it in such a beautiful way in the wildest of my dreams...

  • 16 years ago

    by shela

    You know goran i never knew you are that romantic because i just read sad and depressing poems from you, but now i know you are also a romantic person beside being a great poet.