Whisper More Lies

by StormyStar   Nov 11, 2007


Close your eyes,
Whisper more lies.
Hold me tight,
And say good night.
Your eyes are beautiful
Your words so meaningful

I love how you pretend to care
The nights and memories we share
I wish I didnt fall for you
You just hurt me too
I wish you were here
Your heart so near

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I like it a lot. itd be cool if it was a little longer maybe, but its good how it is too

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    These contradictory feelings are the ones which add the the poems strength

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wouldn't it be nice if we could control the way we felt about people? Just turn emotions on and off like a light switch. That would save us a lot of pain and agony, but I doubt it would be much fun ;) Great work once again - 5/5 GG23

  • 17 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    The end of the poem doesn't flow perfectly but other than that it's a really good poem.

    Close your eyes,
    Whisper more lies.
    Hold me tight,
    And say good night.

    that's my fave part! This poem is emotional and portrays feeling to the reader very very good. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    This poem is like really deep and soo true!
    I freakin love it!!!

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