This poem is like really deep and soo true!
I freakin love it!!!

The end of the poem doesn't flow perfectly but other than that it's a really good poem.

Close your eyes,
Whisper more lies.
Hold me tight,
And say good night.

that's my fave part! This poem is emotional and portrays feeling to the reader very very good. 5/5!

Wouldn't it be nice if we could control the way we felt about people? Just turn emotions on and off like a light switch. That would save us a lot of pain and agony, but I doubt it would be much fun ;) Great work once again - 5/5 GG23

These contradictory feelings are the ones which add the the poems strength

keep it up

I like it a lot. itd be cool if it was a little longer maybe, but its good how it is too