Bleeding Mascara

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 11, 2007


In the valley of death, where the red river flows,
There stands a girl, holding onto a crimson rose.
Paler than a corpse, nothing but skin and bones,
They pick her apart with haggard sticks and stones.

The bugs crawl underneath her skin, eating away,
Her agony is put out onto a starlit display.
The blood lays all around her, dried and crusted,
Because of white lies that she never should`ve trusted.

Clothes ripped and tattered, no place to call home,
Empty, jagged streets -- she continues to roam.
Bleeding mascara trickles down her shaking face,
In a world of blood and war, she`s found her place.

-Jenna Elphick
November 11, 2007

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A metaphoric poem for the drug users who abuse Meth.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Empty, jagged streets -- she continues to roam.
    Incredible imagry there!!! As soon as I read it I got the picture being portrayed only through feeling before. That was beautiful! Truly stunning piece and yet the truth behind it is so sad.
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Too dark for me
    lol

    its nice, kinda gived me a view of dark night, streets, a girl walking

    I dint get the meaning of the line --- nothing but skins and bones
    plz pm me explaining the metaphorical meaning

    I really love the darkeness of last stanza

    5/5

    keep it up and take care,
    Roxiee