Oh he does but he has her ters roll down my face

The poem is amazing.
Great word choice, flow, emotion.
I mean GREAT emotion. (:
One thing, though.
I think the way you have the stanzas could be different.

I'll show you how I think it should be broken up:

I wonder if he knows
how much it hurts
too see him with her.

Has he ever felt pain,
I see him call her name,
and she comes.
too him, filled with glee.

He doesn't know what
it's like to cry,what it is
to be sad, or feel like dying.

My poor soul has been through
much.
And now my hearts been
crushed.
^^
Something like that would just make it look better, and then the words that need to go together would go together.

This is just my opinon, and I think the poem is amazing.
And, I hope you find the strength to move on.
I'm sure you deserve better, darling.

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