by Once an Angel Nov 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Crystal diamonds, glistening grains of sand, |
by Wallace
Wow that was excellent, I love the rhyming and the usage of vocabulary. It flowed nicely and it made sense. Although the part when you say 'frozen and rainy' kind of takes it away for the beach. But I really liked this one. 5/5 |
by OHgreenman
This has simply left me speechless!! |