What a beautiful and heart touching piece.

It's the scent of a flower
On a light summer breeze
Promises of a rainbow's beauty
Putting all fear at ease

This stanza shows the beauty in the world that so many take forgranted.

It's enduring with grace
Loss of loved ones so dear
As they whisper last I love yous
Softly in your ear

The most painful thing to endure the loss of those we love. Thnk God for Faith for it carries us through till we can once again reunite with our loved ones.
Exceelnt job!
Love Cindy

I loved the sense of hope in this piece.. a beautiful expression of your feelings and emotions.. a very enjoyable read..

Ben this is a beautiful poem of faith and encouragement. I am so glad to see something out of your usual dark genre.

I like the rhyme scheme and word choices that follow along to end with a ray of hope.

"It's trying to teach your tiny children
To always do whats right
Even while outside
Futures dark as night"

^ Hard to choose a favorite verse....but being a parent this particular one really got to me.....it's so hard to teach morals and values when all around there are temptations and immorality.

I enjoy all your poems....never know to what to expect! Keep writing! Love, Debbie

Powerfully penned piece. Excellent flow. Great job!