World

by HisBlueEyedAngel   Nov 12, 2007


The world is a place that you
feel pain, hurt, sad, loved, in love,
you just feel all of these things and
sometimes they all get taken
away.

A lot of times you mostly feel pain
and why is it that? your supposed
to be happy and not feel that.

Will finish later.

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  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    This is really good so far - the thing about not being supposed to feel pain could be restated like "pain is for others, not you" or something like that