The rhyme worked well. Fantastic job from you. Great one!!! 5/5 from me!!!

This poem is a very nice poem. The flow was very good and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work 5/5.
P.s-thanks for the comment.

' Lose yourself in a melodic shimmer, ' and 'You'll lose yourself in the magical flow.' were my favourite lines, i really like this poem..it flowed well..and i liked the message i got

Very beautiful poem. The flow and rhyming were just amazing. 5/5

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This poem is really good... your use of wording is great.. you have allot of talent 5/5

You use of imagery here was just wonderful. The emotions were real and the poem was overall a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

This was amazing! I love the way that you rhyme your poems, it makes them flow, and read, well. You are really creative and write with lovely emotions. *5/5*

I can't wait to read more ^_^

I liked it alot! five/five! good job!

mandy

Nice choice of rhyming words. It flows just right.
~ Keep it real ~
Nicole xx