Don't Want Your Darkness

by Joshua Grider   Nov 12, 2007


I Don't want you back
for i gave you my heart and soul
and you smashed it between your fingers

after all we went through
through the good and the bad
theres was always love between us

that love was what held us together
you said "I do" till death do us part
but there was no death and here we are

I gave you so many chances
even though I should'nt have
I never gave up on you

But you changed so much
even you knew you were changing
but you hid under the covers away from the world

you liked the darkness more than the light
and I liked the light
so "I" threw your heart away as well

I can do better than a vampire at night
fall in love with somebody better
mabey an angel in the light.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melody of Suffering

    I love the way that you worded your feelings and the last few lines were my favorite.

    5/5
    -Kayla

  • 16 years ago

    by applecheeks

    That is a very good one i like the ending the best

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this is an awsome poem i know how you feel ive been there before
    5/5 kasia

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow.
    The emotions i get fromt his are Anger, Depression and Loss. Great job!
    5/5
    Keep Writing! & Thanks for the comment!
    Message me sometime!

    ~Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Thats really cute... I hope you one day find that angel your looking for