Pointed Sticks

by Elapsed Nov 12, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / other

Blood, tears

Screams of agony

Murdered victims

Arrows, falling in clouds

Blurring mass in the middle

Zen warrior monks

Broken, pointed sticks

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17 years ago
by Ingrid

Sam, the samourai man, hehe!
I loved this one, very intense read!

5/5 Ingrid
17 years ago
by Cindy

Sam
What an intese piece. Excellent word choices. Very vivid images for the minds eye.
Great job!
Take care Cindy