Comments : Suffocation

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    "do you really care?
    are you truly losing your mind?
    to me...you seem unmoved
    unaffected"

    Tamang-tama sakin toh ah? hehehe.
    lol. ANyway, it's a cute poem of sadness that is simple but very precise. Emotions are stirring and very straight. Very good my friend.