by Becca
This was great. It was like a story that kept me on the edge of my seat. |
by Melpomene
This poem I liked, I found it to be simple and effective. The meaning behind it is really dark deep and sad. I think you portrayed it really well and it seemed almost as if you had spoke from experience with the rape. Overall an enjoyable read which I give you a 5/5 for. The only thing that I can suggest for you to edit is to capitalize your "I's" So that the correct grammer is used. Well done. ~Mel |
by Caroline
Wow! that was amazing! |
by Gasttlee
That was creepy, but it had a story/brilliant horror film kind of feel to it. Overall, it was impressive. 5/5 |
by Abu3li
Though simple but keeps the person reads on coz it flows smoothly |
I love the way you begin this poem with a clock time, this is very interesting. This is very heartfelt poem and the last stanza was the most powerful one. The flow was awesome and overall this is excellent. It's 5/5 job!!! |
I really liked this poem. You could tell how scared the girl was. It flowed really well. |